Eminum-When I'm Gone

台灣的rap應該來朝聖的，雖然是有爸我回來了這樣的流行樂紅了起來。
但是覺得藝術性不夠，灰暗性不夠、韻律性不夠。再者，唱的rap的時候，感情也該放進去！不夠用力，沒有傳達歌詞的意境，話說，星光大道看久了，我就只學會批評 抱歉啊！！

當然要聽國外神級的RAPPER(阿姆)來一段了

"When I'm Gone"

[Introduction]
Yeah...
It's my life...
My own words I guess...

[Verse 1]
Have you ever loved someone so much, you'd give an arm for?
Not the expression, no, literally give an arm for?
When they know they're your heart
And you know you were their armour
And you will destroy anyone who would try to harm 'her
But what happens when karma, turns right around and bites you?
And everything you stand for, turns on you, despite you?
What happens when you become the main source of her pain?
"Daddy look what I made", Dad's gotta go catch a plane
"Daddy where's Mommy? I can't find Mommy where is she?"
I don't know go play Hailie, baby, your Daddy's busy
Daddy's writing a song, this song ain't gonna write itself
I'll give you one underdog then you gotta swing by yourself
Then turn right around in that song and tell her you love her
And put hands on her mother, who's a spitting image of her
That's Slim Shady, yeah baby, Slim Shady's crazy
Shady made me, but tonight Shady's rocka-by-baby...

[Chorus]
And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back
And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back...

[Verse 2]
I keep having this dream, I'm pushin' Hailie on the swing
She keeps screaming, she don't want me to sing
"You're making Mommy cry, why? Why is Mommy crying?"
Baby, Daddy ain't leaving no more, "Daddy you're lying
"You always say that, you always say this is the last time
"But you ain't leaving no more, Daddy you're mine"
She's piling boxes in front of the door trying to block it
"Daddy please, Daddy don't leave, Daddy - no stop it!"
Goes in her pocket, pulls out a tiny necklace locket
It's got a picture, "this'll keep you safe Daddy, take it withcha'"
I look up, it's just me standing in the mirror
These fuckin' walls must be talking, cuz man I can hear 'em
They're saying "You've got one more chance to do right" - and it's tonight
Now go out there and show that you love 'em before it's too late
And just as I go to walk out of my bedroom door
It's turns to a stage, they're gone, and this spotlight is on
And I'm singing...

[Chorus]
And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back
And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back...

[Verse 3]
Sixty thousand people, all jumping out their seat
The curtain closes, they're throwing roses at my feet
I take a bow and thank you all for coming out
They're screaming so loud, I take one last look at the crowd
I glance down, I don't believe what I'm seeing
"Daddy it's me, help Mommy, her wrists are bleeding,"
But baby we're in Sweden, how did you get to Sweden?
"I followed you Daddy, you told me that you weren't leavin'
"You lied to me Dad, and now you make Mommy sad
"And I bought you this coin, it says 'Number One Dad'
"That's all I wanted, I just want to give you this coin
"I get the point - fine, me and Mommy are going"
But baby wait, "it's too late Dad, you made the choice
"Now go out there and show 'em that you love 'em more than us"
That's what they want, they want you Marshall, they keep.. screamin' your name
It's no wonder you can't go to sleep, just take another pill
Yeah, I bet you you will. You rap about it, yeah, word, k-keep it real
I hear applause, all this time I couldn't see
How could it be, that the curtain is closing on me
I turn around, find a gun on the ground, cock it
Put it to my brain and scream "die Shady" and pop it
The sky darkens, my life flashes, the plane that I was supposed to be on crashes and burns to ashes
That's when I wake up, alarm clock's ringin', there's birds singin'
It's Spring and Hailie's outside swinging, I walk right up to Kim and kiss her
Tell her I miss her, Hailie just smiles and winks at her little sister
Almost as if to say..

[Chorus/Outro]
And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back
And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back...

[Curtains closing and sounds of clapping]

【中文歌詞】
是的

這就是我的人生

孤單與無奈的文字…



你是否曾經為了心愛的人而願意不顧一切

沒錯 赴湯蹈火在所不惜

他們是你心中的最愛 而你是他們的保護屏障

你願意摧毀每一個想傷害她的人

但是當命運捉弄 擺你一道時該怎麼辦?

突然間形勢逆轉 你陷入孤軍奮戰

當你成為她痛苦的來源 該怎麼辦?

“爸爸 看看我做的東西”

爸爸必須趕著去搭飛機

“爸爸 媽咪在哪? 我找不到她”

我不知道 到旁邊玩 寶貝海莉 爸爸現在很忙

爸爸正在寫歌 創作需要靈感

給你一隻玩具狗 你自己幫它搖搖尾巴

接著轉身繼續寫歌 隨口告訴她你愛她

把手放在她媽媽身上 她長得跟她媽媽簡直一模一樣

這就是阿姆 是的寶貝 阿姆很瘋狂

阿姆造就了我 但是今晚阿姆的思緒都被寶貝佔據



當我消失 請繼續堅持 別傷心難過

每一次聽到我的歌聲的時候 請記得歡笑

請記得 我隨時看顧著你

我已失去感覺 寶貝請別感到傷痛

記得微笑面對

當我消失 請繼續堅持 別傷心難過

每一次聽到我的歌聲的時候 請記得歡笑

請記得 我隨時看顧著你

我已失去感覺 寶貝請別感到傷痛

記得微笑面對



我一直做著這樣的夢 我推著海莉盪鞦韆

她不斷尖叫 她不希望我唱歌

你讓媽咪哭泣 為什麼 為什麼媽咪在哭泣?

寶貝 爸爸不會離開 爸爸你在說謊

你總是這樣說 你每次說這是最後一次

但是你不會離開 爸爸你是我的

她在門口堆起紙箱企圖把門擋住

爸爸 求求你 爸爸 別離開 爸爸 不要

從她的口袋裡 拉出一條小項鍊

上面鑲著照片 爸爸它會保護你的安全 記得隨身戴著他

抬頭看 我獨自一人站在鏡子前

四周沉陷的牆一定是在說話吧 因為我可以聽見

它們說：「機會已經消失不在 就是今晚」

「趕快明白表示你對他們的愛 要不然就太遲了」

但是當我走出臥室的大門

場景換成了舞台 他們已經離開 聚光燈打開

我開始歌唱



當我消失 請繼續堅持 別傷心難過

每一次聽到我的歌聲的時候 請記得歡笑請記得 我隨時看顧著你

我已失去感覺 寶貝請別感到傷痛

記得微笑面對

當我消失 請繼續堅持 別傷心難過

每一次聽到我的歌聲的時候 請記得歡笑

請記得 我隨時看顧著你

我已失去感覺 寶貝請別感到傷痛

記得微笑面對



台下六萬名觀眾 興奮得跳到座位上

舞台布幕拉下 觀眾丟來的玫瑰遍布我雙腳周圍

我彎身鞠躬感謝你們的大駕光臨

他們大聲尖叫 我的目光再一次掃視台下的人群

我往下一瞧 不敢相信我的眼睛

“爸爸是我 快救救媽咪 她的手脕流著血”

但是寶貝我們現在在瑞典 你怎麼跑到瑞典來了

我偷偷跟蹤你 你告訴過我你不會離開

你欺騙了我 爸爸 你還讓媽媽難過

我買了一個錢幣 上面刻著“第一名的好爸爸”

那就是我最想要的 我只想把這枚錢幣給你

我明白了 沒關係 我和媽咪要走了

寶貝請等一下 太遲了 你已經做了決定

快站上舞台 告訴他們你愛歌迷勝過我們母女

這是他們想要的 他們就是愛阿姆 他們不斷高聲叫著你的名字

難怪你無法安穩入睡 再吃一顆藥吧

我打賭你會的 你的歌詞說明了一切 坦白承認吧

我聽到掌聲 這一次我看不見

怎麼會這樣 我的舞台布幕漸漸拉下

我轉過身 從地上檢起一把槍

扣板機 指著我的腦袋大聲喊著 “死吧 阿姆” 然後一槍轟了自己

天空轉成漆黑 人生畫面快速閃過 我原本要搭乘的飛機墜毀爆炸成了一團灰

當我醒過來 鬧鐘奮力的響著 鳥兒開心的唱著

現在是春天 海莉正在外面盪著鞦韆 我走向Kim親吻著她

告訴她我想念她 海莉開心的笑了 對著妹妹眨眨眼

一切如幻似真



當我消失 請繼續堅持 別傷心難過

每一次聽到我的歌聲的時候 請記得歡笑

請記得 我隨時看顧著你

我已失去感覺 寶貝請別感到傷痛

記得微笑面對

當我消失 請繼續堅持 別傷心難過

每一次聽到我的歌聲的時候 請記得歡笑

請記得 我隨時看顧著你

我已失去感覺 寶貝請別感到傷痛

記得微笑面對 ..